Gabby's Greedy Geese
On one morning Gabby came outside to feed her greedy geese which eats more than anything it will eat whatever Gabby gives it, Gabby gave her greedy geese food and it ate the whole thing by it self which wasn't very nice at all, it left all the other goose behind starving and waiting for Gabby knowing greedy pig will just eat it all by herself.
Gabby got the geese's some more food knowing the geese's don't want any because the greedy geese will eat it all, so the geese didn't have any food to eat till dawn they ate grass the whole day and didn't eat there real food for the night because gabby and her family fell asleep on the couch, MUM! said Gabby we forgot to feed the geese last night I have to go check on then now see you in a bit, "okay honey be back quick i'll make some breakfast while your gone" said mum okay mum said gabby a while later they finished breakfast help me with em dashes okay mum said gabby as gabby walks off wearing her red white and blue dress wow said gabby talking to the ducks don't I look semi colon beautiful what a ed start for you geese to come out looking like you guys haven't eaten in days, well they haven't eaten for a day so they pretty much haven't eaten yet, gabby goes in the garage and gets some food for the geese like bread and more food for the geese with a running start she sprints all the way to the geese proudly and hums the whole way to the geese like a normal farm girl would as she walks back to the geese with no breath but still feeding them because there important.
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